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About Me Member Shadow Deviant Shannon21/Female/United Kingdom Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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Sad part in my story

Sat Oct 17, 2009, 4:40 PM
This is a draft of one of my characters dying (Tari)
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I lay there. My eyes sting whenever they close. My best friend, Enoona...she looks, helpless yet knowing my fate. Ami, my only family, kneels beside me, hurt beyond words. My wound prevents me from moving...I whisper to Ami...I will miss her, but never forget her...she and Enoona will stay in my heart forever...I look back and think about everything. I love them so much...I did all I could. Enoona is sobbing silently. She never has cried before now...I cannot hold on anymore...they know that too. Ami clutches my hand and screams for me not to die. It's too late. My eyes sting one final time as I close them, a tear falling down my face as I lay still, Ami's screaming and sobbing...Enoona's gentle touch...I will remember them...for the rest...of...eternity...

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='( It's really sad...*snffle*

  • Mood: Miserable
  • Listening to: Hinata vs. Neji
  • Reading: My death scene
  • Watching: Charmed
  • Playing: Nothing at all
  • Eating: om nom nom nom...
  • Drinking: Nothing

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I'm pretty much an easy-going person.I get depressed a lot but its kinda normal for me! ^^ I don't mind if you wanna talk. I'm open to anything (except insults duh!)

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: In mah Muffin!!<3
  • Interests: ANIME!!!! (and the odd T.V shows...)
  • Favourite movie: Scary movie, POTC, uh...nope...it's gone...
  • Favourite band or musician: MCR, FOB, SLIPKNOT!!!
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock, Metal
  • Favourite artist: Deidara
  • Favourite poet or writer: Pein lolz
  • Favourite photographer: Itachi coz he's smexy!
  • Favourite style of art: Boom
  • Operating System: I don't know surgery...
  • MP3 player of choice: Ipod
  • Shell of choice: I'm not a crab
  • Wallpaper of choice: anything to do with Yaoi!
  • Skin of choice: The one I'm wearing
  • Favourite game: No clue I play so many
  • Favourite gaming platform: Ps2, Ds, Wii
  • Favourite cartoon character: Deidara
  • Personal Quote: "have you ever been in a position where you think: 'Where the fuck did I go wrong?'.&
  • Tools of the Trade: I'm good at trading things that are worthless for expensive stuff

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Comments


:iconthe-angel-of-silence:
"I don't mind if you wanna talk. I'm open to anything" and yet u send some guy 2 have a go at me (kinda) because I tell u the truth: which I always try 2 do for my freinds...:wow:

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1 minute of sadness. :thinks: Or an hour or something... I can't remember...
:icondeidaras6angel:
Sorry...

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My theme song-Unwell by Matchbox Twenty, Stand in the rain

My tears of blood
My storms of hell
I'm broken and hurt
My soul...I want to sell...
:iconthe-angel-of-silence:
Thats absolutely fine. But you have no idea do u...

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1 minute of sadness. :thinks: Or an hour or something... I can't remember...
:icondeidaras6angel:
No idea about what?

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My theme song-Unwell by Matchbox Twenty, Stand in the rain

My tears of blood
My storms of hell
I'm broken and hurt
My soul...I want to sell...
:iconthe-angel-of-silence:
doesn't matter

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1 minute of sadness. :thinks: Or an hour or something... I can't remember...
:iconcloverfield-monster:
Btw send me a link to this Angel Of Silence guy

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Time and time again you make art...well, when you do so you wish for comments yes :(? But in reality u'r lucky to have comments, but look on the bright side - look what kind of friends it brought you :hug:
:icondeidaras6angel:
how?

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My theme song-Unwell by Matchbox Twenty, Stand in the rain

My tears of blood
My storms of hell
I'm broken and hurt
My soul...I want to sell...
:iconcloverfield-monster:
copy the website that he is on, and paste it making it into a link

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Time and time again you make art...well, when you do so you wish for comments yes :(? But in reality u'r lucky to have comments, but look on the bright side - look what kind of friends it brought you :hug:
:icondeidaras6angel:
ok

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i think

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My theme song-Unwell by Matchbox Twenty, Stand in the rain

My tears of blood
My storms of hell
I'm broken and hurt
My soul...I want to sell...

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